Dear Sir,
As discussed earlier in the annual meeting that was on 20th December 2019, i have prepared a full revised plan to upgrade our marketing strategies for the year 2020. Also, i have discussed it with the marketing head Mr. Preston, and soon we will be laying out our plan to others as well, before we enter the new year. The main reason for writing this letter is to ask you to grant me 10 days leave to attain my sister's wedding.
As i have mentioned above, my sister is getting married on 24th of January 2020, and the wedding is supposed to be held in my hometown, which is Ahmedabad city. She is my only sister and i really have to be there in her wedding, and my family is expecting me to be there too.
I will have to leave from work on 21st of January 2020 and i will be back by 30th January, so i can rejoin work on 31st morning. I know i am asking for too many days, but as my hometown is quiet far form here, 3 days i will need for travelling.
Though i wont be at office, but i will try to be available on phone, if anything comes up. I have talked with Lucy regarding the marketing plan and how to handle the promotional event, she will be working with Mr. Preston in my absence. Also, after coming back i will work extra hours to complete all the necessary documentation that i will need to submit.
I hope this arrangement works out for all of us, and i am hoping you to sanction my leave.
Thank you
Your's Sincerely,
XYZ.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 281.0 206.0 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24199288256 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33333122259 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569395017794 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 358.2 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.463917525773 1293% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.3077126793 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3333333333 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 16.8248392259 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140875393015 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669373751002 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712087502821 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0777907418759 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495661007673 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 70.7449484536 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.61 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.