The tables below show people's reasons for giving up smoking and when they intend to give up.
summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The graphs illustrate the motives of smoker stop smoking, and the specific time they want to leave the smoking habit.
At a glance, it is noticeable that the principal reason for people giving up smoking is to have better physical well-being, and the majority of smoker have an intention to give up their habit.
Regarding the first table, to maintain general health status is the main reason having chosen by more than 64% of smoker in all group, followed by financial consideration at around 30%. Just above 20% of the questioned smoker in all group consider less risk of getting smoking-related illnesses as a motive to stop the habit. Lastly, lower than a fourth of smoker state that the reason they leave the habit because of currently having health issues and family pressure.
Moving to the second table, 60% of the smoker having 20+ cigarettes per day intent to give up smoking and this lower by about 6% of the remaining group. As much as 32% of people smoking 10-19 cigarettes daily decides to stop their habit within the next 6 months. Both 20+ and 10-19 cigarettes groups have a plan to give up their habit next years. In contrast, just a small percentage of the questioned smoker choose to stop smoking in the following month.
- The graph shows the consumption of fats between 1971 and 1997 73
- The graph below shows the consumption of three spreads from 1981 to 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 11
- The government should allocate more funding to teaching sciences rather than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extend do you agree? 67
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. 56
- The carts below give the information about workforce composition in the UK and about average hourly earnings 92
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 154, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...wer by about 6% of the remaining group. As much as 32% of people smoking 10-19 cig...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, lastly, regarding, second, so, well, in contrast, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1039.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81018518519 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50081862454 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537037037037 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2088718548 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.444444444 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 5.23603664747 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178991543654 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821568764999 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700506211729 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125793004232 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824879678413 0.0819641961636 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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