Leaders and directors in an organisation are normally older people. Some people think younger leaders would be better. Do you agree or disagree?
In many companies high positions in most cases belong to senior employees. At the same time,some people consider that if young generation are in leaders posts,it would have more beneficial impact. However,older people have more experience and by force of their status they can easily manage the organisation.
To begin with,old workers are more wise and adapted to job circumstances and working with colleagues. Senior employees ,apart from knowledge,have experience and they know how to solve any problems. They worked in companies in different conditions,which can be as bad as bankrupt,and they saw how to deal with that kind of situations. Year by year to work in organisation they learn not only how to do their job well,but also how to manage other workers and company itself.
Another advantage of older people is that they have status among colleagues and because of this status they have confidence and support from other workers. They work with each other for a long time,and they know each other well. If they have support from colleagues,it will be easier to be the head of the company and manage the collective in order to lead organisation to success.
The conclusion is simple here,that older workers have more advantages than young employees. They would be better at the leaders positions since they are more authoritative and wise.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, apart from, kind of, in most cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1137.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14479638009 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89811145032 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533936651584 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6159173103 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.75 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4166666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11015192629 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046878448199 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526333762776 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0830746856823 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415926802121 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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