Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, people around the world are connected, whether they live together or away from the distance, due to the trendof globalization, the events happening around the world, will surely affectour life.
first of all, the global warming is a compelling example of how the eventoutside our world will affect us. In recent days, a forest fire has happened not only in South america, but also in Australia, the southern earth. The fire was certainly the effect of global warming, it diminished the categoryof trees, animals, and caused the diminishing of air quality around the world. Although in my country, it will not immediately affect my life, however, I can start to do such a movement of recycling, or donate money to save the forest, thus, we will have the chance to protectour earth, and sustainour life. From my perspective, the global issue will not only affect one country, but will affect all of us, it is wrong to ignorewhat is happening now.
Secondly, the issue of global trade is also a persuasive example. The stock market is affected not only by the economic situation within the country, but is deeplyinfluenced by the world business. For example, stock prices will probably not affect your life if you don't have one, however, it will be suggestedas a country policy with economic. For example, if our country's economic situation is within an edge, your basic salary may not be raised. What's more, the price of products could rise, in order to fulfil the economy's needs.
Thirdly, to address this point from the politics worldwide, which you may deeply not care about, is affecting us now, thus, it's better that you care about the affairs all over the world. Take the election of presidents from other countries such as the United States as an example. it may seem uncorrelated at first, however, the election outcomewill affect the world trade model, such as the tariffwar between China and america.
In a word, the affairs around the world, including economy, health issues, weather conditions, and also policies all play an important role in our life, whether it may affect you immediately or not. From the reasons above, I firmly believe that there are undeniable reasons that all of us should stick with the issues happening in the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, for example, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 382.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98952879581 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62138498124 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541884816754 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 11.0 3.08781362007 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6890296941 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.125 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28803709601 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871869068023 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643065866246 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159548822672 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348455542461 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25 Out of 30
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