These days many families move abroad for work. Some people believe that this benefits the children in these families. Others believe that it makes their lives more difficult.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion
In the recent times, some people think that immigrating to foreign country is an advantage for their offspring’s future while others argue that it jeopardizes their lives. However, in my opinion, I personally believe that moving abroad is more beneficial for children in such cases.
On the one hand, young people are more excited nowadays to transfer to a new developed country that to stay in their own developing nation. They are highly exhilarated about the breath-taking view of the tall-rise building amenities, amazing parks, creative aquariums and museums. In addition, they might learn new linguistic and communicative skills by interacting with new faces which in turn makes them more sagacious and acquire cognitive talents which are not in-build. Most importantly, they could host a juvenile right of the developed nation whereas it’s not the situation at their own motherland. Last but not least, they could also enjoy the aroma of exotic dishes from other culture.
On the other hand, adapting to a new atmosphere is a very hard decision to make for adults especially for kids. They will have significant changes in their curriculum according to the new standards as well study patterns. Further, many of them will undergo a social and physiological stress which in turn resulting in a poor academic performance. For instance, in the latest survey conducted by “CANADA TODAY” forecasted that teenagers below 16 years often feel loneliness and depressed as their parents does care about them due to work pressure.
To conclude, I strongly reckon that immigrating to a foreign country is undeniably more advantageous for the children in all aspects of culture and language abilities. Though, migration might be hard initially, but all the roadblocks are only the passing clouds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, whereas, while, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35191637631 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93734216132 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630662020906 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5333599677 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.153846154 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19912591551 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655433525643 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616264835571 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12030727489 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767847828106 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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