You recently read an article in a newspaper about your childhood friend with whom you have lost contact for a long time.
Write a letter to the editor. In your letter.
Say which edition and when did the article appear
Explain why you lost contact with your friend.
Say how you want them to help you to get back in touch
Dear Sir,
I am writing to inquire some information about an article that has been published in your magazine. Regarding to the last version, which is broadcasted on 20th July, a text which is about a businesswoman who is rendering her relentless service to the society.
Honestly, she is one of my close friends whom I missed for the ages. Since, she migrated to another country (Canada), I could not able to get in touch with her. In the yesteryears, we used to share only letters, where after some point of time, all my posts were returned because of the incorrect address. I got to know her location from her biography, though.
Your fascinating newspaper helped me to find out her and it would be grateful if you could send me her complete contact details. I promise that I would not abuse and I would share my childhood pictures of our which was taken 20 years ago.
Waiting for a positive response from you.
Warm Regards,
Teena
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: You're; You are
... location from her biography, though. Your fascinating newspaper helped me to find...
^^^^
Line 13, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sponse from you. Warm Regards, Teena
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
honestly, if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7125748503 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60709513292 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.706586826347 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2505491295 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186274287258 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609294447254 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526603875966 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108837530196 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319599404157 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.