Some people think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness. Do you think people can be happy without much money. what other factors contribute towards happiness?
Few people hold a view that money is necessary to enhancement of pleasure. In my opinion people can be live cheerful life with the hold of limited amount in their hand. There are many other things which can make people to enjoy their life. In the following essay I shall discuss the same.
It i true that money is an indispensable everywhere. It is possible to buy anything with money however, it is not a primary reason for happiness. Firstly, good relations is very much important in all stages of life. Friends and relatives make living worth. People feel more happy when they share and live together and get emotional support from their relations rather than owning lots of money and staying alone. To elaborate, hand-made birthday greeting card from dear ones make birthday person more delighted than expensive ready-made birthday gift. Secondly,freedom play an important role to be happy in life.If people do not have enough freedom in order to enjoy each and everything in their life,for them money does not contain value of happiness. Independent and free living style full fill their requirements even in less amount of money. For instance, celebrities own lots of properties but they do not enjoy free life style like normal people. They do not able to enjoy outside freely with their friends and relative. Always they have to go out with their bouncer to protect themselves from people.
Moreover, pleasure can not be purchased through money. Those who have lots of wealth but no one for sharing and caring can not be happy in their life. Human beings need relations to give meaning and make life worth living.
To conclude, money is vital to accomplishment for all requirements and desired needs however, it does not give satisfaction all the time.
To be happy in life, people need freedom, relations and limited desire. Man is a social animal so without society people can not enjoy only with money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95076923077 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55708784066 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541538461538 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0531910814 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.619047619 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4761904762 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236446797481 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776613007907 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586160281311 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152230799193 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636493558469 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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