A high scope of violent content in contemporary entertainment is a much-discussed issue, which ultimately take a serious toll on children's codes of conduct as well as larer growing-up. Challenges related to this with which children have met face-to-face will be analyzed in this essay, and possible steps to counteract them will be concluded.
Arguably the gravest problem caused by watching violence media is the absorbing dangerous patterns behaviour that youngsters immediately assimilate and apply in daily routine for different negative purposes. This can rapidly lead to bullying, truancy and delinquency, which entually undermine their academic achievement as well as ground rules handed down from parents. Examples can be seen in China and Japan, where films are closely connected with martial arts promote children to commit a physical violence, damaging the relations between peers and the fabric of society. A second serious concern perhaps is ever-rising murders and cruel offences among young generation, meaning that gangster movies and video games concerning fights exacerbate children's view of the world. . As a result, young spectators will assume that this action is reasonably acceptable to take as the way to defeat a rival. This evidence might be seen in Indian, where murders within youngsters has been increased in recent times.
To counteract these dangers, possibly the most effective and most immediate solution would be to ensure parental supervision so as to curtial the time of wathing films or playing games for children, that cotain a negative content for their all-round education. Although the majority of parents are under pressure of workplace these days, chid- minding might be conducted by their grandparents, who are able to act as role models and give a well upbrigning. Another remedy may be to promote to raise awareness about violence in modern entertainment among young generation by using various instructive books in order to put them towards a positive thinking lifestyle. This step would gradually teach chilren for codes of conduct, preventeting long-term impact of cruel films and games.
In conclusion, the main problems seem to murders and negative behavior. The key solution would be the parental supervision, which encourage children to follow right lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, second, so, well, as to, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1971.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52100840336 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88164336465 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.5324843063 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.785714286 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218773183611 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667869803916 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312841102894 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118727080802 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038067143537 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.71 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 78.4519038076 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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