Some people think women should be allowed to join the army, the navy and the air force just like men.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
people argue in terms of women participation in military services such as infantry, navy and air force. many people consider that females should be forbidden to join as a soldier, while, others believe that female had free rein to enlist in any kind of military services just like men. I partially agree with the statements with the reason I outline below.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why the females are good candidates to serve in active duty in the military services. First of all, not all woman have poor physical ability since many of them participate in vigorous physical trainings, making them a suitable candidates for the soldier in any branches of the army. Furthermore, it is proven that women have an excellent skill in several areas in army duties such as managing logistic distributions and financial skill. This brings out benefits to the army institutions as they have additional competent soldiers possessing a wide range of skills.
On the other hand, various considerations ought to be taken into account regarding female serving in military services. Firstly, at a certain period of life, women require maternity leave. This will be a drawback for the nations if they have a large number of females enlisting as soldier because this leave will significantly cut down the number of army troops. Secondly, many female soldiers experience sexual assault either by their fellow male counterparts or commanders. Research on female soldiers of USA found that 4 out of 10 female soldiers experienced sexual harassment during their time in the military. this leads to several health issues such as post-traumatic disorder and depression, and result in the early leave of female as active-duty soldiers.
In conclusion, although there are a few issues should be considered regarding women taking part in any branches of military services, I acknowledge that they have equal skills with the male counterpart regarding their duty as soldiers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, kind of, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21630094044 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8233500161 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576802507837 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8435488956 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.857142857 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109868996856 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391863574811 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521366331555 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828816883946 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793328574076 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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