The road in front of your house got damaged a long ago and nothing has been done about it. Write a letter to the municipal authority complaining about the damaged road.
In your letter:
introduce yourself
explain the condition of the road
and suggest what they should do
Dear Mr Allen Taylor,
I am Cory Gardner, a local resident of Ipswich, Queensland, Australia writing on behalf of the residents of the area to notify you about a dilapidated road which is causing unbearable miseries for us.
I work at a local school and teach mathematics to young students. This is the first time I am writing to the municipal office to complain about something. The park street, the only road we use to get off and in the community, was damaged around three months ago when we had a heavy downpour for a week. The roads have many holes, crumbly places and is bellow usable-condition with uneven flagstones.
We expectantly waited for a month when a team of engineers inspected the road in July. But nothing has been done so far to alleviate our suffering.
I would request you to send a team to probe the condition of the road and take immediate action to have it repaired. We already have had some minor accidents in the past months and would like you to prevent a major one.
Yours sincerely,
Cory Gardner
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 190, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...hing. The park street, the only road we use to get off and in the community, was da...
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Line 9, column 401, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sable-condition with uneven flagstones. We expectantly waited for a month when a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74456521739 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75169650369 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646739130435 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2177172998 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220096287472 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771061348996 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418072787928 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0915401954674 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612769297327 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.