The given maps provide information about the changes in university's Sports Centre which are not available in the present period, will be developed in the future after refurbishment.
Overall, it can be clearly seen that the area of Sports Centre which has nominal facilities, will be expanded in future and will have numerous amenities.
According to the first map, in the middle of Sports Centre there is a 25 metre long pool surrounded by reception, changing room, gym, and sitting facilities which have established in the direction of South, West, North and East of the pool respectively. Furthermore, there are two outdoor courts built in the East and West side of pool. However, the main entrance is located in the south side of the reception.
According to second map, after modernization of Sports Centre the outdoor courts will be removed and in the place of first outdoor court leisure room will be constructed followed by second changing rooms and sports shop which will be established in the south side of the leisure room, whereas gym area will be extended and in the place of second outdoor Court, there will be sports hall in the West direction of dance Studio followed by Cafe and third changing room which will be in the South side of sport hall.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, second, so, third, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1058.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89814814815 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59272486435 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472222222222 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 314.1 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 148.486811985 43.030603864 345% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 176.333333333 112.824112599 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.0 22.9334400587 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 5.23603664747 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166629801344 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840548166067 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707219514464 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122037094766 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533251456049 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.2329268293 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.3012195122 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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