Learning is the pillar of developing oneself. However, a few numbers of people do not support learning. Monotonous education leads to fatigue and students start to lose their interest in studying.
Most people have the mentality to quickly finish the stage of studentship. Studying has become a phenomenon of achieving degrees and competition rather than acquiring knowledge. The education curriculum is responsible for such a mentality of mass people. For instance, in the South Asian countries educational institutions put more pressure fon splendid results without proper teaching.
It is worth mentioning that parents and teachers have significant roles in motivating children to flourish their creativity instead of asking them to stand first in their respective arena. Even society praises the one who holds enormous record-breaking scores. For this reason, there are many students who work really hard to fulfill their parent's dreams albeit their own dreams remain in the darkness.
The educational systems should be such that youngsters enjoy collecting information and know the application of the things that they received as in the form of a book or tutor's lecture. They should not feel the books as a burden. Parents should appreciate their kid's talents and help them to use their skills for betterment. Every successful man is committed to life long learning which is a wonderful fact of motivation for the young generation.
To recapitulate, proper guidance and appreciation with skilled teachers are the most important factors for building a positive attitude towards enlightenment. Here education pattern plays important roles. Therefore the teaching methods should be such that it helps the learners to understand what they are being taught and how to apply that knowledge for being successful.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 206, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, really, so, therefore, even so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51071428571 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92122554307 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639285714286 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.7576784167 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7647058824 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4705882353 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76470588235 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147915367122 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362403698761 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467231546017 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698230623108 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462780802174 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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