Endotherms are animals such as modern birds and mammals that keep their body temperatures constant. For instance, humans are endotherms and maintain an internal temperature of 37℃, no matter whether the environment is warm or cold. Because dinosaurs were reptiles, and modern reptiles are not endotherms, it was long assumed that dinosaurs were not endotherms. However, dinosaurs differ in many ways from modern reptiles, and there is now considerable evidence that dinosaurs were, in fact, endotherms.
Scientists are arguing whether dinosaurs are endotherms or not. Difference between dinosaurs and reptiles together with several reasons seems to confirm that they are endotherms. But the professor refutes this claims based on the following reasons.
First of all, although polar dinosaur fossils have been found in Polar Regions, they might hibernate or migrate during cool times, the professor notes.
Another reason involves the positions and movements of their legs. The professor says that, dinosaurs' legs may be mainly functioning as supports for their body which can gain much large weight. In this way, legs under their body can not confirm dinosaurs are endotherm.
Last but not least, besides the Haversian canals, there are also growth rings in dinosaurs' bone structures. These facts indicate that the dinosaurs' growth rate are not consistent with the weather conditions. They could grow rapidly during cool period or growth slowly during warm period indicates that keeping their body temperatures is not essential to their survives and growth.
In conclusion, the professor reputes the lecture that the dinosaurs are endotherms. Each reasons in the passage are proven to be unconvincing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 139, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'dinosaurs'' or 'dinosaur's'?
Suggestion: dinosaurs'; dinosaur's
...ructures. These facts indicate that the dinosaurs growth rate are not consistent with the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, so, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 30.3222958057 66% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1034.0 1373.03311258 75% => OK
No of words: 185.0 270.72406181 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58918918919 5.08290768461 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 4.04702891845 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57214385915 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 145.348785872 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632432432432 0.540411800872 117% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 419.366225166 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1744659598 49.2860985944 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1666666667 110.228320801 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4166666667 21.698381199 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 7.06452816374 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171492229355 0.272083759551 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609869002718 0.0996497079465 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597893894097 0.0662205650399 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0797560739768 0.162205337803 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497138005257 0.0443174109184 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.8541721854 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.2367328918 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 63.6247240618 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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