Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization.
Why might this be the case?
What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
it is true that recently societies choose to be self-employed, rather than to work in corporate. While some people believe work in an organization harder than self-employed.
there are various reasons why become employee in a company is harder. First, there are rules that obeyed by employee, those things for some people demanding and than deadline some tasks are also make stressful. Second, there are bureaucracy in company that people can not stand with some bosses. The last is monotone work time. In my country, Indonesia, most of company have a standard work time, that is 9 am to 5 pm. For some people that is bored, on he other hand, for some mom who have school children, for some reasons its hard to accompany they children to school because work time problem.
In spite of these arguments, people who choose to be self-employed may be because there are creativity and skill that they should be developed, because in company creativity made by company’s founder. On the other hand, some people choose quit from previous job may be because, there are different values with they company. As a result they chose build their own company or become self-employed.
there are disadvantages of being self employed. they do not receive salary, even they should give their employee to get salary. All losses must be borne by themself.
In conclusion, there are some factors it would be chosen by people to be self-employed. Such as an internal factor and external factor.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
it is true that recently societies choose ...
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Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...oyed, rather than to work in corporate. While some people believe work in an organiza...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...ization harder than self-employed. there are various reasons why become employee...
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Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: AND_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...se things for some people demanding and than deadline some tasks are also make stres...
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Line 5, column 196, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'made'.
Suggestion: made
...g and than deadline some tasks are also make stressful. Second, there are bureaucrac...
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Line 9, column 245, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to quit'
Suggestion: to quit
.... On the other hand, some people choose quit from previous job may be because, there...
^^^^
Line 9, column 353, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to build'
Suggestion: to build
...th they company. As a result they chose build their own company or become self-employ...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...n company or become self-employed. there are disadvantages of being self employe...
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Line 13, column 49, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...e disadvantages of being self employed. they do not receive salary, even they should...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, so, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in spite of, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01606425703 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75826146739 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562248995984 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.0941543612 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0625 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5625 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.423462182315 0.244688304435 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162486752628 0.084324248473 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158250399124 0.0667982634062 237% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262841714447 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924866014325 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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