These days ,the usage of internet is very common .what are the benefits of internet
In this contemporary world internet has become a part of everyone's life with the advancement of technology are life has become so continent. nowadays, the usage of internet is very popular among the people.This essay i shall discuss merits before reaching a conclusion .
To embark on, the first point that comes to my mind is with the help of internet,we can do our multiple task with in short span of time such as , there are a number of apps which we can do shopping at home .moreover ,we can spend our leisure on you tube app as we can watch movies as well as we can watch serials .
Discussing the same,people can enhance their knowledge to watch historical movie apart from this, people can know about foreign countries .taking the case of India,Amazon app is very popular among the people in India . people order the clothes and many other things on this app .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, in short, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 720.0 1615.20841683 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 153.0 315.596192385 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70588235294 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57967105887 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 176.041082164 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 506.74238477 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.8294880786 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.0 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.4 7.06120827912 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100133286503 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631154114205 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646596301166 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765435739945 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704119744881 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.