Today, the life expectancy of people is much higher than before. Some people think that older people should continue to be involved in the workforce. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
At present time, lifespan of humanbeing is dramatically ameliorate in comparision with yester decades. There are few thinkers who believes that older individuals should must connected and involved in their daily work or job routine life as long as possible. This dissertation will discuss mu opinion in following paragraphs with suitable examples.
It is true that development in biological science is proving really helpful in increasing human life cycle than ever before. I am partially agree with the view of some thinkers who believes old age people should have engaged with earning activities as it is really supportive in their last remaining living years. For example, earning in old age makes them undependable on others and they can live with proud in society. That way older individual connects with workspace looks possitive thought.
At the same time I am also disagree with the statement. When people reach their retirement age their body and mind capacity for working is starting decreasing day by day. It is a time when they rejuvenate them self rather than working individual or doing jobs. For instance, if a person who already retired and still doing field job can not do their best they can than other younger people. it is always advisable by experts for older people to not involved in workforce in their retired age.
To conclude, although engage with earning activities can economically supportive older people in their last years of life, on the other hand it is also turns harmful for them if they works physically.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'ameliorated'.
Suggestion: ameliorated
... lifespan of humanbeing is dramatically ameliorate in comparision with yester decades. The...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
... cycle than ever before. I am partially agree with the view of some thinkers who beli...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
...hought. At the same time I am also disagree with the statement. When people reach t...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...est they can than other younger people. it is always advisable by experts for olde...
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'work'
Suggestion: work
... is also turns harmful for them if they works physically.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so, still, for example, for instance, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12598425197 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67625042263 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602362204724 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5375127608 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.153846154 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174222407607 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063223319743 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489368702023 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107310237375 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303574360832 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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