People think that old buildings should be knocked down and give way to modern buildings. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, there are so many old buildings still existing along with stylish buildings. There is a fair amount of people believe that the aged structures should be replaced by modern ones. In my opinion, I totally with this idea and this essay will argue why the new buildings should substitute the old ones.
On the one hand, I agree that the government and the company should maintain the old buildings because those buildings keep a great deal of memories of many generations. People are likely to visit the old buildings where contain their memory with beloved ones to recall particular events when a celebration coming. For example, I always visit my high school which is about 60 years old already on the 20th of November every year to meet my ex-teachers, friends, and to recall events that I had during my study. This is a good example to support old buildings should be maintained.
Although old buildings store a great amount of memories, however, it also contains potential dangers to the public. The foundation of the old building, which are more likely to become weak and subsided after existing for a while, can put the public in a dangerous situation because the buildings can be collapsed at any time. In addition, the old buildings are having difficulty to function well because of out-dated design. For example, there is not enough space in old buildings to build elevators which are essential in this modern world. Therefore, it is beneficial for the public to have modern buildings built. Those examples strongly supported the idea that old buildings should be abandoned to give way to new modern buildings.
In conclusion, the essay argued why the public should agree on the abandonment of old buildings to give land for modern constructions. From my sentiment, I totally agree with the idea that the old constructions should be replaced due to safety reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97802197802 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62517023023 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542124542125 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5628133747 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.538461538 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294070697865 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124587485673 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732891319546 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206577326562 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304530376287 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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