Marriages are bigger and more expensive nowadays than in the past. Why is this the case? Is it a negative or positive development?
Nowadays, marriages are far more extravagant than before and are celebrated like carnivals. we see the instagram and Facebook profiles are flooded with wedding pictures which themselves makes us eager to buy designer clothes, have pre-wedding shoot and allures us to have a destination wedding even when we have tight budget. it has become a trend to spend lavishly on wedding just for the sake of posting pictures on social media. Personally, I believe that gives a negative message to the society making the generation of the millennial progressively materialistic.
people all over the world want their dresses to be designed by fashion designers who are charging hundred pounds just for the dresses being worn on the weddings. wedding have become a business and have lost its sanctity of just being considered the holy union of two souls for rest of their lives. Moreover, people are charged humongously for a three day celebrations without taking into consideration whether they will be able to bear the expenses. but, since it is a style statement to have a big fat wedding, they will definitely follow the trend. Instead, wedding should be organised with keeping the budget and not for showing the wealth and family status.
However, there are few who still believe in simplicity of wedding and tend to make their wedding an event of doing charity for the poor. To exemplify, two government officials holding the ranks of indian administrative officers got married in a court and donated the money to an orphanage and an old age home. such gestures have a meaningful impact on the welfare of the society. So, why can not we become epitome of such gesture where we are sharing our special day with them?
To recapitulate, having mulled over above stated information it can be deduced that we need to plan wedding sensibly which is memorable for not only the newly weds but even become an excuse to share the happiness with the helpless and needy which will surely make the ceremony even more auspicious.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97345132743 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68660479089 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601769911504 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.568292599 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.428571429 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2142857143 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64285714286 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0380833678028 0.244688304435 16% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0180998942098 0.084324248473 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400997147658 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0257589940331 0.151304729494 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238407633084 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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