many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves.some people think that this is a good thing,while others think that it has disadvantages.
discuss both views and give your own opinion.
multinational companies use to sponsor sports event to develop the sports as well as they get their companies developed according to the research we find many advantages than disadvantages,
which is also been considered
firstly,companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves and to develop sports which means they get benefited in both sides.sports which are broadcasted in international level
needs a company to be sponsored and they do marketing and they do their own promotions by the sport events such as:foot ball,cricket,basket ball ect....multinational companies used to get
promoted by adding their company name before the sport events and advertise them through channels.many MNC's does marketing by providing many types of product to get promoted in the particular
game in stadiums such as: T-shirts, cooldrink cups,team flags ect....provided by the MNC'S these types of strategy get the company profited and developed
some disadvantages also to be considered.by sponsoring,company authorities does the existence of over ruling the sports.events where they rule it by spending money for players and hire them.
consequently players play game for money which is commonly known as betting and match fixing.where we find the companies plays a negative role to have their profits in doubled so we find some
player not playing their games for nations they play for MNC'S and money which is not good and healthy game
in the end,companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves and they do their own promotions to be benefited and developed in both sides consequently disadvantages also plays a vital role
of hiring players to get MNC's doubled in their profits and not having an healthy sport.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, so, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 6.10837438424 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 272.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48161764706 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40546570841 2.71678728327 125% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485294117647 0.580463131201 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.0 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 12.6551724138 16% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 136.0 20.5024630542 663% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 279.0 50.4703680194 553% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 745.5 104.977214359 710% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 136.0 20.9669160288 649% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 32.5 7.25397266985 448% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.12807881773 266% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.33497536946 281% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191435169531 0.242375264174 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155274360591 0.0925447433944 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350174312197 0.071462118173 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0852098518805 0.151781067708 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729190560559 0.0609392437508 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 72.4 12.6369458128 573% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -66.56 53.1260098522 -125% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.54236453202 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 56.3 10.9458128079 514% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.69 11.5310837438 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.92 8.32886699507 167% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 62.0 9.94827586207 623% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 56.4 10.3980295567 542% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 62.0 10.5123152709 590% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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