In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?
Hunger among citizens across the globe has been on an incessant rise in the contemporary world. Population in a large number of countries are suffering from lack of food despite the huge developments in the field of farming. This essay will discuss the main causes for this unfortunate scenario such as shrinking farm land, growing populations. This essay will also suggest solutions to this problem, including creating farming as an industry, population control.
Governments have also started to diminish farming lands and allot them to industries. In addition, number of citizens has also been on a heavy rise every year. People started to look at things from a monetary aspect which led them to give up agriculture and give up those lands to industries, resulting in decreasing farming share in spite of increased efficiency in farming due to modern techniques. Moreover, the rate at which humans are born is growing, unable to offset the farming output. Such deeds are the sources for inadequate food supply across the planet.
Population control and promoting farming as industry are both critical to mitigate the global hunger issues. Though farming output can be increased with advances in technology, the mouths fed by it has to be proportional to the output, but it is vice-versa. Not only for food but every natural resource will be affected with increased human usage. In addition, since every aspect is being weighed monetarily, farming has to be promoted as an industry promising good incomes, implying increased share to farm lands. These acts could really promote availability of food.
In conclusion, this essay discussed why hunger has been growing and also offered solutions such as population control and developing agriculture as an industry.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, moreover, really, so, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25441696113 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78243815155 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56183745583 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8371028753 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135782403592 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425481793825 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498206353566 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887779838505 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392421134075 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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