People living in the 21st century have a better quality of life than the previous centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
time has been changing centuries to centuries and life is attaching as object with this phenomenon. As a resulting value of life its come quality of life with respect to time from advanced medical facilities, up market infrastructure, development of transportation. However, some people believe, the pollution is the atmosphere and quality of food is slowly getting deteriorated which are a threat to the humanity .In my Opinion, I strongly agree to this thought, that the quality of has grown which compared to countries ago, which will be discussed in the following passage.
The improved infrastructure gives us better livelihood rather than ancient unsecure accommodation which is clearly tends to us a good quality of life. In other way, facilitation of modern transportation reduces the transit duration; such facilities were not enjoyed previous era’s people.For Instance people of ancient epoch had been traveling for approximately 2-60 days from one place to another for different kind of purposes like business, tourist etc. So, All dealings related to travelling was meaningless but due to improvement of transportation system the travelling time being reduced in lips and bounds. In addition the quality of food is being constantly monitored by government to cater quality eatable to every citizen, but some of people argue that previous ancestor consumed nutrition food that now .thus it is believed the quality of life has been grown in the 1st century which is good sign.
Furthermore ,The advancement in medical facilities aided people to live longer ,various life threading disease are identified and cured .on the other side ,people who lived centuries ago died due to ignorance and improper medications. Therefore, current generations people are benefited because of up market medical facilities when compared ancestors.
To Sum up, as the technology grows, there is no debate the quality of life is improving day by day which I believe there won’t be any second thought, also this has cascading effect to all living beings in the universe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, second, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, kind of, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38837920489 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99082568807 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599388379205 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.2712428488 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 176.2 106.682146367 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.7 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.6 7.06120827912 221% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245113887364 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959119855474 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636880990413 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139424453474 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423587578106 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.0946893788 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.