The ease of international travel and the spread of various kinds of mass media all over the world have made it more possible than ever for people to know how other people live in other countries.
Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, technology has not only made it possible for each and everyone to travel across the world but also, it has brought the entire world to your disposal through different types of media platforms. In this essay we will weigh the merits and demerits of this advancement.
Though, traveling around the world is easier than ever. Staying in another country may give the feeling of not belonging to the place and home sick. For example, language barrier, climatic conditions, and cultural difference.
However, the convenience of moving around the world has done more good to the people than harm. Humans can now trade and make resources available. For example, a country with low species cultivation and importing it from another nation to meet the needs of their population, and also can sell resources which are available in abandoned quantity in their country.
Moreover, people get to learn from different types of media about different types of culture around the world and benefit from them. For instance, other countries can take advantage of herb medicine from asian countries, and in asian nations can learn about the better lifestyles.
Finally, tourism as an industry can boom and support the country's growth. It will also create employment opportunities for citizens. Leading to better infrastructure and connectivity amongst the part of the country.
In conclusion, i believe the merits of availability of the convenience to travel around the globe and be able to share culture through various media platforms has overshadowed the demerits of it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29482071713 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74785471675 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581673306773 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.5471853105 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9285714286 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209183638735 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633974508469 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506492175542 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951664472512 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372449766363 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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