Even though globalization affects the world’s economies in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. Discuss.
Globalization is a commonly used term in this day and age, while it has brought myriad of advantages to developed and developing nations around the world, it also introduced certain drawbacks for everyone that are worth considering.
The primary benefits of globalization are in the field of trade and economy. The advances in science and technology have made it possible for companies to expand their business across territorial boundaries. Consequently, companies become more productive and competitive thereby improving the quality of their goods and services. Additionally, companies from developed nations have created employment opportunities in developing countries as well, contributing to overall growth in human capital and raising the standards of living worldwide.
Despite of the aforementioned benefits, globalization also come with problems in the area of public health and social balance. As transportation allows mass movement of people around the globe, spread of infectious diseases viruses and bacteria all over the globe has becomes an uncontrollable phenomenon. To illustrate, SARS and Corona Virus originated from Asia however it effected to lives of people all around the world. In addition, when companies in developed nations outsource their mundane tasks to low-wage countries, their cost savings are couple with imbalance in distribution of income in developed countries and unemployment.
To conclude with, although globalization remains an inevitable to economies to flourish, the world is not prepared to deal with social and health problems it creates. Given the situation, it is imperative for corporations and administrations to take a balanced approach by taking appropriate steps to deal with its drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... developing nations around the world, it also introduced certain drawbacks for ev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, so, well, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77906976744 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26516974345 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616279069767 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2469118915 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.545454545 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0693601035127 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0276660255968 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299544489752 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0452965468057 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260704304673 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.54 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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