Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned while others think people should be free to choose Discuss both views and give your opinion

Sports is always the best entertainment. It also carries the country sentiment in international level. Almost everyone love sports as preferred pass time event, whereas, many people go crazy with the thrill related to the dangerous ones. A part of people believe that sportsman should be free to decide that, however, some have a opposite opinion on the same. This essay will discuss both the view and will support why the freedom to choose is important.

Sports can of different levels depending on the risk involved with it. Audience mainly watch it for entertainment, but a sports person has to go through a lot to tough training to be in a competitive level. Few of the games can even challenging and a small mishap can cost the players life. For instance, high mountain climbing looks fascinating for viewers but a minor slip in that stiff mountains can take the person breath off. So, even though these dangerous and difficult sports are a one been preferred by people they should be some sort of restriction.

Practice can make a person perfect; or close to perfect. Every things that’s looks difficult or easy at a glance, is not always the same. The same goes for sports here. The car or bike racing, for instance, looks amazing while watching but that shows is an output of an extensive practise and experience. While there are in the sports the risk are always covered by lot of safety measures. While particular games could have a lot of risk involved but the experience and safety should be adequate enough to accommodate them all. Thus a person should be free to pick any sports, if they have the basic criteria fulfilled.

In conclusion, there are many sports that requires knowledge of the games. One can pursue a course to understand the games and gain experience. In my opinion, oeople should be given the chance to select the sports of there chose once they have the gone through the certification.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS General Training

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 329, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...free to decide that, however, some have a opposite opinion on the same. This essa...
^
Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... involved with it. Audience mainly watch it for entertainment, but a sports perso...
^^
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...inly watch it for entertainment, but a sports person has to go through a lot to tough...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'challenge'
Suggestion: challenge
...titive level. Few of the games can even challenging and a small mishap can cost the players...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 279, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'players'' or 'player's'?
Suggestion: players'; player's
...lenging and a small mishap can cost the players life. For instance, high mountain climb...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...f an extensive practise and experience. While there are in the sports the risk are al...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 363, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n the sports the risk are always covered by lot of safety measures. While particu...
^^
Line 5, column 530, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...dequate enough to accommodate them all. Thus a person should be free to pick any spo...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, thus, whereas, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81626506024 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60563408842 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551204819277 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6546894374 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.95 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286511335455 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075540569225 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811441005066 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175832316747 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631215751849 0.056905535591 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 329, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...free to decide that, however, some have a opposite opinion on the same. This essa...
^
Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... involved with it. Audience mainly watch it for entertainment, but a sports perso...
^^
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...inly watch it for entertainment, but a sports person has to go through a lot to tough...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'challenge'
Suggestion: challenge
...titive level. Few of the games can even challenging and a small mishap can cost the players...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 279, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'players'' or 'player's'?
Suggestion: players'; player's
...lenging and a small mishap can cost the players life. For instance, high mountain climb...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...f an extensive practise and experience. While there are in the sports the risk are al...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 363, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n the sports the risk are always covered by lot of safety measures. While particu...
^^
Line 5, column 530, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...dequate enough to accommodate them all. Thus a person should be free to pick any spo...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, thus, whereas, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81626506024 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60563408842 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551204819277 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6546894374 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.95 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286511335455 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075540569225 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811441005066 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175832316747 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631215751849 0.056905535591 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.