Dear John,
Hope you are doing great!
I am apologized that I have broken the camera tha I borrowed it from you last month. I feel terrible but I already ordered new one online for you so please please forgive me.
It happend 2 days ago when I was in the centre park. I put the camera on the bench for a while but a child with his mother passing me and the kid use his hand touched camera without carefulness so it droped on the earth.
I am extremely sad but I knen I should not blame the kid because that is my problem, so I went home immdietaly and ordered the some model for you. So I will give the brand new one for you. I am so so sorry and I hope you can forgive me because we are firend, right?
Hope see you soon.
Kind regards,
Joe
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: please
...ready ordered new one online for you so please please forgive me. It happend 2 days ago wh...
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Line 9, column 128, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
... I went home immdietaly and ordered the some model for you. So I will give the brand...
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Line 9, column 195, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: so
...ll give the brand new one for you. I am so so sorry and I hope you can forgive me bec...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 26.3917525773 23% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 611.0 937.175257732 65% => OK
No of words: 151.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.04635761589 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09794802227 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 127.690721649 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609271523179 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 196.2 290.88556701 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8568780633 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8888888889 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7777777778 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130981319483 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612832170231 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545568289749 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.086610912912 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516851800296 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.91 8.71597938144 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.1 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 41.2886597938 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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