the table below shows the cinema viewing figures for films by country in millions
The table compares four different countries, namly India, Ireland, New Zealand and japan in terms of the number of movies viewer
Overall, action movies are the most popular type of films in all countries. The number of people watching films in India is more higher than other countries
In India, abou 8 million of people watch action movies while the figures for others are slighly lower. India has around 7.5 million of people viewing Romantic films, which is nearly tiwce times as much as that of Ireland. It is noticable that the number of people who watch Romance films in Japan and New Zeland are equal, at roughtly 4.5 million
Approximately 55 million of people viewing Comedy movies are found in Ireland compared to about 4 million of people in Japan. India has the highest figures for Action, Romance, Comedy films, however , the highest figure in Horror movies goes to Ireland , at just over 6 million of people. The figure for New Zwaland, India and Japan in Comedy movies are well over 4.5 , just 2.5 and 2.2 respectively
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use only 'higher' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: higher
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...Japan in Comedy movies are well over 4.5 , just 2.5 and 2.2 respectively
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83146067416 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26367015219 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544943820225 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.8762609954 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.333333333 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6666666667 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229099564233 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121864187283 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368986028315 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132543493865 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584887097015 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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