this gragh below shows the percentage of Auastralian exports to four countries from 1990 to 2010
The given gragh illustrates the amount of exports in Australia for 4 countries including China,Japan,US and India over the 20-year period between 1990 and 2010.
Overall, while China and India showed an upward trend over the years mentioned, a reverse pattern can be seen to Japan and US.
It is clear from the gragh that although both China and India followed the same starting point in the vicinity of 3%, China witnessed a continuosly considerable rise in the proportion of Australian exports and finally had the greatest percentage, which was nearly fourfold that of India. Additionally, after reaching the peak at around 7% in the year 2010, India experienced gradual fall to 5% holding the lowest position among the factors surveyed at the end of the year.
As can be seen from the gragh that being at the first rank at the begining, Japan declined steadily to 20% for the whole years. In contrast,the rate of US saw a downward fluctuation, which hit its bottom in the year 2010 before modestly increasing to hold the third position.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Japan
...ustralia for 4 countries including China,Japan,US and India over the 20-year period be...
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Line 4, column 139, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... to 20% for the whole years. In contrast,the rate of US saw a downward fluctuation, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, third, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90395480226 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72202662801 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649717514124 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.1948568457 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.666666667 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150882325031 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743824746089 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576189418595 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097131287325 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596691302973 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.