some people think that govt. should put heavy tax on unhealthy food?
Nowadays,consumption of unhealthy food is on increase,as it is mostly preferred by the society. To curb this issue,government has taken step of levy taxes on such food products.
this essay intends to delve both sides, before coming to the conclusion.
Undoubtedly, the habits of consuming unhealthy food leads to health related problems. Food products such as burger ,pizzas and many are mostly liked by the large number of people. Moreover, a major reason for higher consumption of junk food, is that healthier food options are not affordable by everyone. To exemplify, a glass of sweeten soda is cheaper than a glass of milk. Therefore, imposing high taxes on food items is not a wise idea, instead of that government can decrease the price of healthy food such as vegetables,fruits,milk and other goods.In addition, this will choice to the people, whether to stay healthy or vise-versa.
On the other hand,the health of the public is not only the individual responsibility, as the authorities should also be responsible for it. Furthermore,health problems like heart disease, obesity are caused because of unhealthy diet . Although, as people do not spend time on exercise ,which is the main reason they are becoming couch potatoes . Likewise, imposing taxes such as fat-taxes is a wise decision, but the rich section of the society can easily afford as it will not cost them much. As,it will become a burden for the weaker part of the society those who are dependent ed on such cheaper food items for their survival.Also, the survey conducted by the university of New York, states that taste is first factor while deciding what to eat, so increasing the tax on junk food items will not ,make much differences.
In conclusion, putting high taxes on these cheaply available food is not a good option. However, their should be more healthier food option from which one can have choice in eating and that should be in reach of their pocket.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01851851852 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0421407012 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58024691358 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.5695559163 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.4 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235138502377 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769398610645 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460788230895 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123452259769 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064148265479 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.