Online shopping is increasing dramatically. How could this trend affect our environment and the kinds of jobs required?
Nowadays, online shopping is growing up suddenly. This trend has a great deal of positive influence on our environment and the kinds of job which are required.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that online shopping do harm to environment and employment patterns. Firstly, shopping on the internet has some negative effect on environment. Because products are put into boxes, many landfills are packed with useless boxes. Moreover, labor market is under online shopping’s influence. Since traditional supermarket may be affected by lacking customers, a great deal of staffs must face with unemployment. In addition, supermarkets or traditional stores might lead to the bankruptcy due to lacking of operating expense.
On the other hand, online shopping brings a lot of pros of environment and the labor market. First of all, it is worth considering environment. As customers buy on the Internet, traffic jams is fell down. Moreover, thanks to limiting private cars which are used to go to grocery store, the amount of greenhouse emissions was decreased.
Another point worth noticing is that online shopping contributes to create employment opportunities. Due to the number of customers, online retailers have a lot of delivers shipping. In addition, because of the rapid of developing of online shopping, labor who do not have degree are able to find suitable job. Furthermore, traditional retailers can cooperate with online retailers to impulse buying.
In conclusion, online shopping might be beneficial by environment and the labor market.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, may, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42975206612 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06436565033 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586776859504 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.7391932298 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.2941176471 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2352941176 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255083360384 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078889502851 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788676362717 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161160703875 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0937538983709 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.62 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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