The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, we live in an age when many of us are using social media to communicate instead of using face-to-face interaction. While many people claim that the use of social media has a great deal of positive impact on daily life, I agree that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that online communication contribute to improve human interaction. To start with, thanks to social networking site, people can keep in contact with members in their family, who live in other countries. For example, students who are studying abroad have the ability to keep in touch with our loved ones using Facebook. Moreover, social media has an influence on business. Due to a lot of powerful tools, online meetings of leaders are taken place much easier than traditional meetings.
On the other hand, I personally believe that social media do more harm than good on daily basis. First of all, interacting through computers reduce the quality of interaction which use verbal languages. Since users have a habit of using abbreviated words on social networking site, they are not able to communicate with formal languages.
Another point is that social media has some negative impact on children. These are those who argue that it is necessary for children to learn how to use technological devices. As a result, a great deal of young people are addicted to social media because of the overuse of online conversations. What is more, young children may isolate themselves from real interaction. For instance, instead of making friends at school, children want to have some visual relationships which contain a lot of risks.
In conclusion, although the use of social media has some advantages to human interaction, I believe that the negative effects overweigh the advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, to start with, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1186440678 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85301314383 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552542372881 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7521817836 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.375 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8125 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282928478854 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865680738233 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835824733975 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165240256832 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110159233394 0.056905535591 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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