Environmental problem such as pollution and climate variations are increasing now days. The government have taken measures at global level but they got only few solution.
our world climate is very fragile therefore we have to protect and maintain it as good as possible. Although governments are trying to do their best we still have high pollution in many levels plus climate fluctuations.
Firstly, we should use resources reasonable and cost effectively. one of the biggest problem in our society is over consumption and production. Country witch belong to top of the economy list will use over 50% of world resources. we can learn from the studies that a big slice of the products we buy will end up in trash bin. For example, in Estonia over quarter of food people will buy end up in waste. it is a good example how we do not use resources in a good way. Solution for this problem would be smarter shopping habits.
Secondly, ozone holes in the sky are getting bigger every year, therefore we should stop using equipment which will run on fuels, like cars. Amount of car in the world is rising every day. By manufacturing car we again use resources and pollut the environment. we can say that cars are one of the biggest problem in the world. In that case we should think better and more convenient ways to manufacture and maintain them. For example, bringing electric cars to mainstream will help to fight against air pollution.
To conclude, environmental problems are rising every day like pollution and climate variations. In order to tackle that problem we have to change our ways how we spend resources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1196.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72727272727 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64168859743 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.2354497349 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.3529411765 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8823529412 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94117647059 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120148200152 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470429444182 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602562485172 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103026333502 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646973852998 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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