Some people argue that successful leaders in government, industry, or other fields must be highly competitive. Other people claim that in order to be successful, a leader must be willing and able to cooperate with others.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Leadership is one of the most important skill for a person. If a person has better leadership skill then, he or she can help share their thoughts more easily or even lead people with the same thoughts. The prompt suggests that cooperation is more important than competition for leadership. I mostly agree with this statement for the following three reasons.
To begin with, cooperation among the people, especially the leader and the followers, can help in developing a feeling of unity among them. Cooperation can instigate a feeling of brotherhood among the young people, which might make them want to help and support each other instead of trying to disparaging someone for their own benefit. For example, Mahatma Gandhi, the leader of the pacifist movement against British rule in India, did not just work alone. He cooperated with a number of leaders, along with thousands of Indian citizens, to overturn the British empire. His feeling of cooperation and collaboration among the common people is what helped him garner such a large audience. This shows leadership can be better maintained with cooperation and it can even help maintain good relations of the leaders and their followers.
Similarly, Cooperation among the young people allows each person to present their thoughts, speak up in the crowd and thus, make everyone feel that they are a part of something. With cooperation, great ideas can be generated because many people work together to refine an idea, working together to correct all the possible fallacies. If people and their thoughts are more valued, then they are more likely to follow their leader.
However, a sense of competition can encourage people towards innovation. If there is a feeling of competition among the young people, then they are more likely to try to outrun the others by trying to be more unique or innovative than the other. For example, in industries like the technology, rapid development happens every day and new inventions are developed more often. One reason for this is the feeling of competion among the companies to try to make better products than their rivals. The leader can even use this feeling of competition to encourage their employees or followers to try to outsmart their rivals. So, the feeling of competion can even help in developing leadership qualities in young people.
In conclusion, the feeling of leadership can be better developed if society can instill a feeling of cooperation among the young people more than the feeling of competition. However, it is not to say, that competition doesn't develop feeling of leadership. Hence, I mostly agree with the statement that a feeling of cooperation can help better in leadership than competition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, similarly, so, still, then, thus, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 12.9106741573 194% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2286.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 445.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13707865169 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78133806542 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.449438202247 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 702.9 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7358225872 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.909090909 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2272727273 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.31818181818 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162247983625 0.243740707755 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563164852224 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389014149629 0.0758088955206 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103725360285 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344811090379 0.0667264976115 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.