For students spend a majority of time at school, no wonder that teachers are considered as the foremost sources for knowledges. While the thriving Internet has changed education approach into new pattern, and younger generations are in favour of this fresh learning style. Obviously, I cannot agree that students learn more from teachers.
Of course, following the instructions given by teachers in person still is the mainstream for most students, which is thought particular important to those young pupils at the early stage, because they have little skill set for study. Due to professional teaching methods and skills, teachers deliver well-rounded knowledge in a most understandable way, explaining and answering patiently if anyone in the class don’t get the point. Not only teachers offer written information but also guidance which in most context is critical. Like without tutorial advice, it is possible that this student could be failed in his assessment.
However, there is no standard stuff can meet everyone’s need, neither can a common learning system. For some students, as more as they learnt in school, they developed some self-learning skills and they would like to go deeper. Thanks to the popularization of Internet, millions of information these students are seeking for will show up on the screen after typing some keywords into a searching engine, for example, Google. Besides, it is universal that educational resource is not allocated equally, though every single student is desperate to go to top universities. Online courses make it possible that almost students have the opportunity catching with the best classes. Actually, there are many marvellous online courses released by top universities available on the Internet nowadays, such as Climate Science provided by University of Cambridge.
In conclusion, studying by teachers’ instruction or by participating in online classes, where a student can gain more knowledge depends on what exactly he or she wants
- When a country develops its technology the traditional skills and ways of life die out It is pointless to try and keep them alive To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- In some countries there has been an increase in the number of parents who educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school Do you think the advantages of this overweigh the disavantage 89
- Some people claim that newspaper is the best way to get the latest information because it has more influence than other forms of media To what extent do you agree or disagree 80
- Students at schools and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers than from other sources such as the Internet and television To what extent do you agree or disagree 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ning system. For some students, as more as they learnt in school, they developed s...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, however, if, so, still, well, while, for example, in conclusion, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47741935484 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95235139713 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651612903226 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3584085233 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.285714286 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225401716124 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737632878315 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644685178167 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133644849732 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696093056218 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.