Topic: as well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There has been an increasing argument that companies should have more social obligations, rather than only focusing on financial objectives. From my perspective, I am completely convinced of the idea that companies should do more for society than simply making money.
On the one hand, it is understandable why companies put their emphasis on making profits. It seems logical that their top priority is to cover running costs. They have to pay employees’ salaries, buildings and utilities. Moreover, to remain successful and have an edge over their competitors, all businesses have to invest in improvements and innovations. If they are unable to meet the changing needs of customers, they can end up going bankruptcy, and their social obligations become irrelevant. In short, a company only makes positive contribution to society once it is in good financial health.
On the other hand, businesses should not be run with the sole aim of making money, they have a wider role to play in society. One social obligation is that managers and owners have to treat their employees well rather than exploiting them. They can pay their employees a living wage that ensures a better quality of life. I also subscribe the idea that companies spend a proportion of their profit to support local charities and finance environmental projects or education initiatives. Finally, businesses should by happy to make contribution to society through tax system instead of trying to minimize their tax payments by using accounting loopholes.
In conclusion, apart from financial objectives, companies have the responsibilities to support not only their workers but also local communities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, in conclusion, in short, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34848484848 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0483929741 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598484848485 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1999492964 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.857142857 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19095225471 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654480541575 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434537892407 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121161721541 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186911340697 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.