The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the car journeys made per day by the residents and the non-residents over the period of 10 years between 1996 and 2005.
Overall, the number of car journeys of the residents in the city center at the initial four years where significantly higher, whereas the non-resident’s daily car journeys gradually got increased after year 1999 due to 2 rules introduced into the city. Although, for both type of the residents, their car journeys were considerably higher at the initial years, later got reduced effectively by the year 2005.
In the year 1996, the average number of car journeys per day was highest around 9900 as seen in the graph which was slightly lessened about 45-50% up to 5000 in the successive years after the parking meters were introduced into the city center in 1999. However, they reduced the car journeys down to average of 4000 in 2005 as Westgate street and Park lane was ceased to traffic.
On the other hand, the average count of the car journeys was seen as 5000 and had tended to increase significantly which got stabled for a while. Though, the number of journeys got highly reduced to around 3000 in the year 2003 after immediate predestined rules in the city but was evidently more compared to resident’s car journeys in the final year 2005.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'was the highest'.
Suggestion: was the highest
... average number of car journeys per day was highest around 9900 as seen in the graph which ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82959641256 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64024663439 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502242152466 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.5423645296 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.857142857 112.824112599 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8571428571 22.9334400587 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 5.23603664747 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217250862569 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119325069261 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076082594721 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158479929268 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437727766066 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.2329268293 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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