People are becoming too dependent on the Internet and phone. Is it a positive or negative development?
These days dependence on internet and mobile phone is increasing at a faster rate. This trend is having both benefits and drawbacks on the personal and social life of the individuals, however I assert that if this advancements are used in the disciplined manner it can undoubtedly make life much more easy and comfortable.
To begin with, with the help of internet and mobile phones numerous difficult tasks can be easily performed in much less time, which helps the people in saving time and ultimately they have more spare time to spend on things of their own interest. For instance, earlier organizing the official meeting was extremely time consuming. People have to even travel to distance location for attending them, but now with internet video conferencing is gaining popularity, which saves the time of many people. Apart from this many advance mobile applications like facebook and watsapp are helping individuals in staying connected with their distance relatives and friends.
Moving further, there are various educational websites on internet that are gaining popularity among students and helping them to understand the concepts on their own by sitting at home, whereas others who are not aware have to take the help of tuition classes by paying extra money. So this development is saving the hard earned money of the parents. In addition, learning anything new is not that difficult nowadays. People are growing in different fields by gaining the knowledge from the internet. Recently, one of my friend has learned French via online course. Although it was paid course but still she has saved the travelling time and contents of the course was also systematically planned.
In conclusion, unequivocally spending extreme time on any thing will have detrimental effects on humans, but if internet and mobiles are used in popular way they will bring immense advantages and helps the people in growing further.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
These days dependence on internet and mobile phone...
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Line 1, column 210, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...e individuals, however I assert that if this advancements are used in the discipline...
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Line 7, column 55, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
... unequivocally spending extreme time on any thing will have detrimental effects on humans...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, whereas, apart from, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22186495177 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69688867159 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610932475884 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.2115360667 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.923076923 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130971341491 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502597217072 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587543325556 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0790172734513 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00767280526043 0.056905535591 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.