You are going on a month training program to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events’ organizer.
Write a letter to the Training Organizer. In your letter:
• express your interest in the role
• request more information about it -
• explain what experience you have
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am quite excited to attend the one-month training program and I just come to know that the head of the course is looking for someone who has the skills to handle social events. Therefore, I am writing to express my interest in the role of social events organizer in the upcoming training program in the United Kingdom.
Furthermore, I would like to know about the duration, venue and team members of the events. I would really appreciate it if you could provide the role and responsibilities for this position. Moreover, I am quite interested to know more about the theme of the event.
It is worth to mention here that I have organized several events during the college and university courses. I have also earned appreciation certificates from the event organizers. I have performed quite well and I am capable to handle large sizes of the team and event as well. Thus, I believe that I am a qualified and experienced person for this role.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Deepak Sharma
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'events'' or 'event's'?
Suggestion: events'; event's
...press my interest in the role of social events organizer in the upcoming training prog...
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Line 5, column 267, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...know more about the theme of the event. It is worth to mention here that I have ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 355, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d and experienced person for this role. Thank you for your time and consideratio...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, moreover, really, so, therefore, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92105263158 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85921264563 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4580675491 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9166666667 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322833275221 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103319223413 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776616072555 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155533859578 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0986376756121 0.0580467560999 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.