People spend a lot of money on various things as they earn more money nowadays than before Is it a positive or negative development

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People spend a lot of money on various things as they earn more money nowadays than before Is it a positive or negative development.

Undoubtedy the spurt in the disposable income of populace have led them to spend lavishly on different things. Even though availabilty of ample product has made the life quite luxurious, I cogitate this is a negative development as it has enhanced the level of evils in the society and contaminated the environment .
Nefarious activities prevailing in the modern society is the byproduct of extreme obession of material belongings.Seemingly when a person who has hefty surplus amount spend on catering elevated demands, this vogue is replicate by other section of society.Consequently, other deprived section of community chases the lifestyle of affluent and gives birth to myriads of criminal activites.Also,it is biased to overlook the fact stated by Crime Control Council in America that major portion of juvenile delinquencies are gainig ground owing to the greed among youngsters which they develop form watching others incomes and spending habits.
Spurt in disposable money are accountable for surge in the desires which has eventually gravitated the vast consumerim and industrialisation. As a result, the producers are eploiting the natural resources at a large scale to fulfil the demands of consumrers and producing huge number of products without considering its adverse effect on ecology.To exemplify,in the gone calendar year a the survey was conducted bY WHO which unambigously depicted that rise in consumerism is vastly responsible for dwindlingly of natural resources and degradation of enviornment. Therefore, abundance of money leads to the trend of unnecessary spending which would turn this planet into a nonliving place.
In conclusion,although prosperity in the financial resources has blessed the humans with fortune,it has generated plethora of hassles in the community and detoriated the ecology.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, look, so, therefore, in conclusion, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65090909091 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.45266092526 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643636363636 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 182.438583459 49.4020404114 369% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 222.0 106.682146367 208% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.2857142857 20.7667163134 189% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101860109667 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464448530418 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348382941737 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0486412353708 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028477993258 0.056905535591 50% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.8 13.0946893788 189% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 14.97 50.2224549098 30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.9 11.3001002004 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.08 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.71 8.58950901804 136% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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