People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Humans are the most Intelligent Species on this planet. Over thousands of years, our ancestors evolved to from Ape-like mammals modern day Humans. When Ancient humans invented farming, they settled down and created clusters of settlements what we now call villages, towns or cities.
To live in a group or say, a "pack" we were required to acquire a habit to share our resources with our friend and family. This caused humans to evolve emotional intelligence, and thus emotions.
In Modern Lifestyle, emotions play a very important part socially as it can determine how others think about us. This becomes important to control our emotions in certain situations as it can lead one to take wrong decision which can have a far-reaching cascading effect.
Thus, Elders and the Wise advise us to never take decisions considering purely our emotions and not thinking about the decision based on forthcoming consequences. In some critical situations this can result in damage to one's carrier or even life.
Let us consider an example, consider a situation where one's loved ones are captured by criminals, in this situation our emotions might tell us to fight the criminal, but if we compare the resources present with both parties, it is not a wise decision as it can even result in death.
Again, let us consider another example, of a situation in a courtroom, where the Judge has to take decision on a case. in this situation, the judje is required to make decision based on witnesses and other availabe evidences, it is not ethical for him/her to take decision based on his/her emotions or what he/she feels like.
People who make decisions based on emotion and not the far-reaching results of their decision or logic, might regret the decisions they had taken easrlier, purely based on emotions, in most cases there is no space for any corrections, i.e. it is too late.
Some people belive that taking the decision impulsive, based on emotions is the righ thing to do, as the decision is usually taken with minimal thought. Nevertheless, it seems that taking decision based on emotions, with minimal thought is not a good thing to do, as it might lead to unwelcomed outcomes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, so, thus, as to, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 368.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98641304348 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74277142198 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524456521739 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9966307328 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.333333333 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5333333333 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53333333333 5.21951772744 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350596510725 0.243740707755 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121121056256 0.0831039109588 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128002445016 0.0758088955206 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173665675806 0.150359130593 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129416562794 0.0667264976115 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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