Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to ask if an item of hand luggage I left one of your flights has been found.
I flew into Sydney last night on flight SQ234 from Singapore landing at 9:25 pm. When I arrived home, I realised that I had not taken my small travel bag out of the overhead locker. It is made of black leather, has one external compartment and there was a luggage tag attached to the handle with my name and address on it.
While the bag itself is not valuable there are several items in it that I cannot afford to lose. Besides the electronics, including a mini iPad and hard drive, there is also my work diary in it, which contains a great deal of crucial information. There were also several personal effects that have great sentimental value.
I would be grateful if you would do two things. Firstly, please acknowledge receipt of this letter and secondly, could you find out whether my bag has been handed in by your cabin staff to your lost property department? Please contact me as soon as possible to let me know whether it has or not.
Looking forward to your prompt response.
Yours faithfully,
Chris Potts
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ndle with my name and address on it. While the bag itself is not valuable there ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58536585366 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43440538237 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.692682926829 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2501643652 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3333333333 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271874319734 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766042676665 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795977077863 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123271990519 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812413401418 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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