People today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the causes?What are the solutions?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that they are not safe anywhere whether it is inside or outside the house.There is a wide range of factors that account for why this is happening.In my opinion, this situation can be remedied provided that some effective measures are taken.
To commence with,there are myriad of reasons for this soaring concern.The most preponderant one is that unemployment is increasing day-by-day in some nations.As a result of this,crime rate has increased at alarming rate, because unemployed people are committing crime in order to cater their needs.Due to this, people do not feel secure even in their houses. Apart from this, dramatic rise in the traffic is also one of the responsible reasons for this issue.When folks go outside of the house, they feel unsafe because of the careless driving of others.For instance,the study results published by the government of Australia in March 2014 and April 2016 clearly indicate that 1.25 million folks died due to the car accidents.
Steps to deal with this problem are many.Most effective one are not remote and complicated,but accessible and practicable.The primary one lies in the fact that senior authorities should provide employment opportunities so that crime rate can be reduced and masses feel secure at home. Besides it, government should organise awareness camps to educate people about the consequences of committing crime and stringent rules should be applied.Moreover, cameras should be installed on main highways and vehicle acceleration should be recorded in them.By doing this,crashes will be decreased and people will stay secure outside the house.
To conclude, dealing with this problem of feeling unsafe at home or outside by the people is one of the most prevalent issues that face almost all countries of the world today,although it can be alleviated by collective efforts,its potential impacts is indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, moreover, so, apart from, for instance, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30188679245 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00932059486 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578616352201 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.2420203734 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 281.0 106.682146367 263% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.0 20.7667163134 255% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.3333333333 7.06120827912 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138609533542 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748343168879 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0239666317679 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090892284086 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176002556223 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.0 13.0946893788 229% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.22 50.2224549098 18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 11.3001002004 222% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.35 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.98 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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