Dangerous automobile drivers
Nowadays, taking part in transportation is a daily work but maybe has risk to your life because of unexpected traffic accidents. It’s very likely to say that dangerous automobile drivers contribute to the issue has been mentioned.There are three main types of them. They are speeders,cell-phone users, and teenagers.
To begin with, speeders are dangerous drivers,which is huge factor in car crashing. When people drives with high speed, they hard to control or handle if the front objects stop suddenly. Therefore, that can lead to serious accidents with the high mortality. So if you are hurry, do not drive too fast, it’s very dangerous. Maybe you will get to your places sooner a litle bit or you will ruin your life.
The next kind of person who can create danger is cell-phone user while driving.By doing that, people can get distraction easily.They do not focus on driving anymore .Furthermore, they can not hear anything around even someone honks. Thus, they can hit other vehicle nearby. So that, do not do two things at once especially while driving.
Last but not least, teenagers are also considered dangerous automobile drivers for sure. First, they are not allowed to drive if they are under 18 years old due to the lack of knowlegde about traffic laws. For examples, there are many traffic signs that teens do not know what they mean. So teenagers are always misunderstanding and go to the wrong ways. In addition,teenagers are not proficient in driving,they don’t have much driving experience.Hence, that is very dangerous not for only drivers but also people on the road.
With all the tokens have been mentioned ,you can recognize who is dangerous automotobile drivers. To keep you and your family safer ,you should avoid bad habits like speeding, using cell-phone while driving, and if you are not allowed to drive by law, do not try to do that.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, even so, for example, in addition, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97770700637 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92370043962 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59872611465 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.7380248033 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8333333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184197507511 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648997631992 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121191316467 0.0667982634062 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108661421909 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858807643107 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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