There is a moral necessity today for the richer countries of the world top help the poorer countries develop in terms of feeding the population, education and health care.
f /
Today, it is important to note that the public has a growing appetite for different content areas o f
news, including national, local, enteilainment, sports, politics, weather and traffic news. With news
becoming increasingly important, public attention has been brought to the creditability o f journalists. In
my opinion, it would be over-simplistic to say that journalists can convey all messages to the audience
without distorting them.
Not surprisingly, whenever people talk o / journalism, objectivity is the first word that springs to
mind. Reporters are generally expected to disclose all facts and uncover all sides o f an issue without
introducing any bias, as opposed to commentators, who are allowed to provide personal opinions.
However, in reality, objectivity is hard to achieve. Journalists have to succumb to either commercial or
political pressure, distorting facts and misleading the public. In many countries, news organisations are
controlled entirely by powerful political parties and enjoined to disregard the truth and disseminate
information that guides public opinions.
Another factor contributing to the erosion o f journalistic standards throughout the news business is
that in these years, increasing weight has been given to following news values, entertainment, oddity
and celebrity. To cater for the tastes o f wider audiences, journalists can go so far as to twist the facts,
fabricate news and spread rumours. Many news media have a clear preference on media personalities
and use their public appeal to increase viewing rates, giving these publicities，who hardly remain
neutral, numerous opportunities to express their opinions publicly on a subject in which they have a
personal stake or bias. It is thus fair to say that news is now less trustworthy.
In general, a successful journalist should be first able to use careful judgement when organising
and reporting information. Determination and persistence are required when journalists ought to defend
the freedom o f the press and ordinary citizcns’ right to know the truth, despite being under different
forms o f pressure. In addition, they should be sensitive to and interested in current affairs at all Levels.
In acting as successful communicators and information senders, journalists should also have a good
command o f language skills and a real knowledge o f different cultures, countries, races and social
groups.
As shown above, people have reasons to suspect the creditabilily o f a journalist. Either as a
medium that deliberately affects the public interest or as a form o f entertainment that does not attach
much importance to seriousness^ journalism has failed to maintain objectivity and live up to ideals of
journalistic responsibility. Without showing respect to freedom o f express and conveying messages
accurately and promptly to the public, one cannot be acclaimed as a qualifed journalist.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: F
f / Today, it is important to note that ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, thus, as to, in addition, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2519.0 1615.20841683 156% => OK
No of words: 451.0 315.596192385 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58536585366 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36670574034 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 176.041082164 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578713968958 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 758.7 506.74238477 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3423151433 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.578947368 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7368421053 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73684210526 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 30.0 4.38176352705 685% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0178360189217 0.244688304435 7% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00583967839434 0.084324248473 7% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0140266316863 0.0667982634062 21% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00478504992615 0.151304729494 3% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157989429662 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 147.0 78.4519038076 187% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: F
f / Today, it is important to note that ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, thus, as to, in addition, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2519.0 1615.20841683 156% => OK
No of words: 451.0 315.596192385 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58536585366 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36670574034 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 176.041082164 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578713968958 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 758.7 506.74238477 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3423151433 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.578947368 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7368421053 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73684210526 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 30.0 4.38176352705 685% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0178360189217 0.244688304435 7% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00583967839434 0.084324248473 7% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0140266316863 0.0667982634062 21% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00478504992615 0.151304729494 3% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157989429662 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 147.0 78.4519038076 187% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.