Dear sir,
I am writing this letter to apply for a tutor in your reputed college after seeing the advert published by The English Tribune, on 29th March 2020, on your reference.
I will feel glad certainly if i would get an opportunity to use my teaching skills and capabilities to teach Financial Accounting to needy students. It is one of the imperative discipline of Bachelor Of Commerce prescribed under the syllabus of Panjab University, Chandigarh.
I would certainly be a better tutor as I not only have specialization in the same from a renowned University of Australia, but also have four years experience of a recognized college. Apart from it, this kind of community work always gives me an inner contentment, providing an essence of better usage of my gained education as well.
Even though I am working as an assistant professor at Lajpat College yet I get assured to you to go the extra mile to provide deep knowledge of subjects to students.
I am eagerly waiting the response from your side.
Yours faithfully,
Maria
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...nse from your side. Yours faithfully, Maria
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, apart from, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94915254237 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94591462402 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.689265536723 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.8368158118 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 76.5299724578 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186505729337 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063053404376 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428837671026 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083407907199 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441055143721 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 7.59969072165 127% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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