You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You
phoned the shop but no action was taken.
Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter
● describe the problem with the equipment
● explain what happened when you phoned the shop
● say what you would like the manager to do.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Navdeep Puri, dweller of Huston Street U.S.A, penning down this epistle to lodge a complaint regarding a glitch in the recently purchase micro oven from your store. Last Friday, I have bought an oven of LG brand and after three days , I have realized that there was a technical problem while cooking any item in it.
Though I have already filed this complaint with your representative at shop over the phone, it is not resolved by yet. Event though he guided me about some manual settings in the oven, all in vain and neither he send any electrical engineer or he reported this to the company level.
I am one of those customers who are associated with you since inception, thus it is quite disheartened to say that the quality of your products are depleting day by day. It would be highly appreciable if you replace my oven with new one or refund my amounts. Please consider it seriously otherwise I can file a suit against you.
I am anticipating a positive and prompt response from your side.
Yours faithfully,
NAvdeep Puri
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...deep Puri, dweller of Huston Street U.S.A, penning down this epistle to lodge a c...
^
Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...an oven of LG brand and after three days , I have realized that there was a techni...
^^
Line 5, column 201, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...al settings in the oven, all in vain and neither he send any electrical engineer ...
^^
Line 5, column 214, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'sends'.
Suggestion: sends
...n the oven, all in vain and neither he send any electrical engineer or he reported ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, thus, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69680851064 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59105882717 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.707446808511 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.5145482488 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1111111111 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176045070263 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708030429791 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394749370695 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864669979091 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341187173351 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.