Watching a live performance such as a play, concert, or sporting event is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is true that watching live performances is one of the best ways to enjoy shows. However, watching a play, concert or sporting event on television should be considered to be more enjoyable in some aspects.
There are many reasons why a great deal of people love watching shows on TV rather than observing live shows. First, going to live performances, one might become a victim of delinquencies that cause some unpleasant consequences such as phone stolen. In fact, plenty of evidence suggests that a staggering number of crimes such as pickpocket or drug trafficking committed at music festivals, sporting events, shows and concerts. Second, attending live shows, one can hardly make the most of it due to the massive crowd he or she has to join. It is clear that if one stays at home and sinks into his or her favorite chair, he or she will be able enjoy the performance most, instead of fighting the crowd and getting exhausted at the live performances.
It also economically sounds to watch performances on television. First, unlike observing live shows, which requires physical travels, costing unnecessary time, effort and money, watching performances on TV is a good way to avoid those things. Furthermore, by watching shows from home, one also avoid contributing to traffic jam, which is beneficial for the whole society. Second, watching shows from home, one can enjoy the show at the very low cost, or even zero. Since the television license fee is much cheaper than the ticket for live performances, one can watch the shows without taking into account the cost.
In conclusion, in the light of the facts above, watching performances on television is a good way to not only hinder potential crimes, but also save up money. Moreover, one can be able to enjoy the performance by his or her own way without bothered by others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, as to, in conclusion, in fact, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91987179487 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79429650337 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557692307692 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2218311762 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.642857143 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257050869187 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100852422528 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071005471061 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186210491637 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10237443708 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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