Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Generally, it is becoming increasingly common that people prefer do online shopping rather than going to shop. Although this recent change of lifestyle has come along with some advantages such as saving time, but there are also various disadvantages such as saving like lacking of movement. From my perspective, its benefits overweight on its drawbacks.
On the one hand there are some negative aspects for doing online shopping. The first and foremost of them is decreasing of physical activities. To dig a little deeper, in the past people were used to leave their home to buy their necessary goods but, in the present, they are reluctant to go shopping even in their local shops which are in a walking distance of their homes. Secondly, Products are sometimes are advertised with fake pictures so that when they are delivered to customers make them stunned and dissatisfied. The last but not least, shopaholic people are indulging in online shopping and they are always attempted by tempting advertisements so that they are going to buy inessential stuffs. They will be invoiced in huge cost at end.
On the other hand, there are some merits for online shopping. The obvious argument in its favor is time saving. To be more specific, for buying your desired product, not only you do not need to go around the city and wasting your time to find it, but also you can buy it only by one click. In addition, by online shopping you are facing with many more options that you can buy more perfected goods in comparing to go shopping. Finally, in shopping on net there are some striking discounts that you can buy your stuffs in very reasonable and cheaper prices. For instance, it was about three months that I had decided to buy series of books which have come up very expensive but unexpectedly, in last week, one of online shopping websites had announced the big sale of books with a very ideal discount so I bought them online without any delay.
Inconclusion, by taking into account these points, I firmly believe that the advantages of online shopping are much more than its disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 266, Rule ID: AS_ADJ_AS[1]
Message: Comparison is written "as saving 'as'".
Suggestion: as
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82777777778 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62275771368 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547222222222 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.4656162426 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.625 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206455664021 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06110264537 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503078917841 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118613612754 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518480058511 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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