Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter with regards to train number IN5234, whose timing was changed last week.
My name is Kevin, working as a Senior Executive with Smith Industries located at Jalandhar, which is an industrial area. Since, my office is located 150 miles away from my hometown i.e Amritsar, I had to travel by train. As other options, like travelling by bus or car not only impacts the time but cost also.
From last week, train timings were changed and not only me, but also plethora of people are facing huge difficulties. Moreover, there is no halt for this train before 11in the morning which is disturbing all, even university going students are at home due to non availability. People who commute to office using this train had to work for late hours due to which there family life is suffering.
Although, new buses are allocated for the people of our town but due to cost and distance constraint, there is a need to rethink on the decision of train timing. Earlier train departures at 10 AM but even if it departs early there is a great relief for common people. Moreover, there are some other trains also available that touches Jalandhar and Amritsar, arranging their halt could also work.
I hope you will give due consideration to this letter and take necessary actions for the goodwill of citizens.
Yours faithfully,
Kevin Cook.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... car not only impacts the time but cost also. From last week, train timings were ...
^^^^
Line 16, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s. Yours faithfully, Kevin Cook.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85593220339 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48686581464 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648305084746 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1217302703 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193783451527 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676304731247 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0193247800642 0.0603063233224 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974445980203 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0102373462021 0.0580467560999 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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