Some people believe that educational success depends on good teacher, while others believe that students' attitudes are important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is thought by few that academic achievement of the pupil dependences up on the mentor that is his way of teaching and guiding, while others opine that to succeed in education mentee’s behavior and interest is more vital. I believe that; however, teacher has the certain role to play, but students have predominant part for their educational success.
Pitching into the first area of discussion, people have reason for their assertion that teacher are responsible and can help their child for academic growth. Guidance of mentor is definitely helpful for the getting the concepts clear in much better way. Proper style of teaching can even make the boring subject interesting. For example, during school days, our history teacher teaches us in such a fascinating way that almost every pupil gain the interest in the boring subject like history and able to score well. Apart from this, proper training and educational background make the mentors expert in their field and they can inculcate the deep knowledge among the juvenile, which helps the child to elevate in life.
On the other hand, will power and desire of learn is more significant than anything else. If students want to study any subject there are many other ways like reading journals, article and books of that particular field. Furthermore, with the advancement of technology help of internet can also be availed. For example, many online portals is helping the young ones to gain the clear understanding of the subjects in practical way. Many students of poor family who have not able to afford the coaching fee for competitive exams have creaked the difficult exam with their own hard work and determination. For instance, Indian’s toughest exam UPS is mostly cleared by students through self-study.
In conclusion, unequivocally educator can help the pupil in numerous way for gaining knowledge, but to avail the proper benefits of the education students interest and desire to grow in realm is the essential requirement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 223, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in realm is the essential requirement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15644171779 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68648093163 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585889570552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.206315379 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.071428571 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121240203747 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435943759277 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052566292487 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938825643609 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707201779898 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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