TPO 10- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Living in this era of modern technology, fewer people can ignore or deny the crucial role that technology plays in our world. People, no matter young or old, are obsessed with this new intelligence. Technology could act like a two edge sword with both unique cons and pros that could be more important when it comes to children. Video games are one of the challenging issues.
One of the main problems with computer games is its addictive nature. This could be even more worrying when children are in the dilemma of playing video games or studying for their exams. Even if they opt to study, they can scarcely focus on the material since the brain is looking for its usual source of joy. Furthermore, it is noteworthy that when a child chooses playing video games instead of doing his school chores, he is learning how to escape from bitter facts of this life. That is why we can observe many irresponsible adults who have not learnt to face realities in their childhood.
On the other hand, getting overwhelmed by videogames can deprive kids from having active communication with real people, friends and family members. As it is totally evidenced, a huge part of our sociable personality is nurtured through interactions with other people in society. Computer games not only simulate a fake, unrealistic and fiction world for children, but also they can ruin their golden opportunities in childhood to acquire superior characteristics like sociability, self-confidence in relationships, self-esteem to talk in public and creativity.
Lacking of such abilities could bring them dramatic consequences in future.
At the end, it should be taken it into considerations that in spite of all probable negative effects of video games, now with the undeniable connection of technology with every aspect of our lives, it is becoming more difficult for parents to restrict their children completely. Thus, it is suggested to supervise the time and type of videogames based on psychological and professional advices of experts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 368, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to play'.
Suggestion: to play
...is noteworthy that when a child chooses playing video games instead of doing his school...
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Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... could bring them dramatic consequences in future. At the end, it should be taken it...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, thus, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14803625378 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9376497658 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622356495468 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.5577777401 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.6 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0666666667 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162957038035 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510547327965 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370197884808 0.0737576698707 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811972965261 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324716060349 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.